Documentary Evaluation

Evaluation

My documentary was based on the addiction of smartphones and there was mainly interview and also factual informations within my documentary. I think my management of project is not as good as I expected because there were too much going on when i tried to find time for film and lack of interviewee that has willingness to be interviewed by this topic. I think this is a  quite sensitive topic to discuss about to teenagers. So I  chose to be interviewed by myself because my own experience of addiction to mobiles I think I can express my own view about this problem. 

I think the strength of my documentary is that I have clearly explained my point and make it understandable for my audience and I've added humour element to my documentary which was my cat jumped into the frame. I think the weakness of my film is that there could be more people involved and talk about the topic and also more factual information should be given to audience. I think i could improve it by add more element to make more like a documentary and possibly change the portrait frame to landscape or wider but the reason that I use mobile to film it was because it could be linked to my topic.

Audience feedback
We watched each other's documentaries in class and we are going to give each other some feedback based on the film. The first feedback I got was that I could interview some other people as well so it's not always me in the film.  Also my voice could be louder and more confident.